Now, the person to do so will not only be in my good graces, but also go on to fame and fortune by having their accomplishment recorded and their name printed in the auspicious MIT Tech.

not only, but also 가 들릴리 없다. 특히 will not only be 는 전혀 안들린다.
“not onyl be in my graces” 는 뭔뜻일까나.

Former winners include Nobel Laureates, …

I’m sure that Tom has the answers.
영어식 표현이다. 주어가 동사함을 단정하는듯한 느낌.